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Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:05:00 PM   
NeedyLittleLaura


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Status: offline 		Otay, so I adoooore writing, so come on people, write me some BDSM haikus!

If you dunno what they are, here's the basic break down ((of course, we're going with dropping the traditional nature theme and spirling toward YAY BDSM...)).

Haikus' are short, three line poems that have a specific order.
The first line MUST have 5 syllables,
The second line MUST have 7,
And the final line has 5.

So... let's see  those 'creative juices!'
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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:07:54 PM   
NeedyLittleLaura


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Status: offline 		  Oookay I'll get us started!!!

CROP

Softly your hand stokes,
My tender, swollen, buttocks,
The welts there mean love.

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:09:59 PM   
hisannabelle


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From: Tallahassee, FL, USA
Status: offline 		outdoor bondage

his breath on my neck
the bark bruising to bare breast
sweet exhalation.

sorry, that's all i have in me for tonight...just finished composing too many poems for my creative writing class tomorrow. being prolific is for the birds. :P

< Message edited by hisannabelle -- 3/28/2007 11:10:33 PM >

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:20:26 PM   
justplainjava


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Status: offline 		he secures my arms to branches above, making it so i can only touch the tip of my toes,
i feel the sharp edge of a steel blade as he runs down my spine, wiggling at the feel of the cold metal touch my skin

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:21:17 PM   
domiguy


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Status: offline 		Naked on web cam
NeedyLittleLaura sits
One more hard line lost.


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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:24:00 PM   
seanspet


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Status: offline 		OMG... you cross the line!

LOL....

Domiguy is sad,
Oh so lonely for a touch,
Submissives beware!

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:27:58 PM   
NeedyLittleLaura


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Status: offline 		lol seanspet thanks.

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:27:59 PM   
justplainjava


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Status: offline 		Greetings Sir Seanspet
how should a simple slave beware and what should she beware of, she hears no barking dogs, sees no prowling, cats that could be one's familiar
take care and be safe
java

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RE: Haikus - 3/28/2007 11:48:42 PM   
MaamJay


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Status: offline 		How hard He hits me
Each spank makes my ass so red
And my heart softer.

What would my life be
Without love He expresses
Hard slap and soft kiss.

If i did not serve
How could I ask another
To serve Me as well?

Finding this lifestyle
Has been the best thing for M/me
Happy Gemini!

That will do for now I think LOL!
Maam Jay aka violet[A]

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 12:17:54 AM   
Caitriona


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Joined: 8/28/2006
Status: offline 		Here are my two contributions for the moment...

touch of the leather
warming and stinging bare flesh
beg for another

sitting at his feet
his look brings me so much joy
love him through service

....

and one from Master...

another stinging
assault on my beaten flesh
I love him for it



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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 1:11:41 AM   
Hime


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From: Vegas
Status: offline 		so plump is the fruit
bruised by the hand that picked it
love is its nectar


~ xoxo


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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 1:21:11 AM   
justplainjava


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Status: offline 		the nectar that turns to wine so warming, and soothing as it seeps into soul of  a body longing and hungry to the touch be gentle or be it rough but all in all be but pleasing

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 1:39:14 AM   
Hime


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From: Vegas
Status: offline 		Drawn to Me by Lust
Captured by My Dominance
Bound to Me by Love


~ xoxo


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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 1:42:42 AM   
Suleiman


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Status: offline 		Needy little sub
demanding all my juices
no time for that now.


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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 2:42:59 AM   
Domin8tingUrDrmz


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From: Portland Metro, Oregon
Status: offline 		Little boys begging
For me to fuck their asses
How adorable.

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 2:50:06 AM   
justplainjava


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Status: offline 		not begging but bending to Master will to follow his wishes, his delight, and to listen to wanting of the darker side of his heart
take care and be safe
java

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 3:12:35 AM   
kate


Posts: 177
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Status: offline 		not knowing my needs
i search in the arms of men
always left empty

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 3:15:22 AM   
kate


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Status: offline 		java...those are beautiful... but they are not hiaku

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 3:36:15 AM   
mons


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he crawel to my begging for the crop
he wells are red as i touch his skin
he moan into my flesh and suck in
he is mine he begs for more with eye so loving

mons

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RE: Haikus - 3/29/2007 7:27:10 AM   
ExSteelAgain


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From: Georgia
Status: offline 		I count syllables
And some of you are cheating
Lashes are coming

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