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NeedyLittleLaura -> Haikus (3/28/2007 11:05:00 PM)
Otay, so I adoooore writing, so come on people, write me some BDSM haikus! If you dunno what they are, here's the basic break down ((of course, we're going with dropping the traditional nature theme and spirling toward YAY BDSM...)). Haikus' are short, three line poems that have a specific order. The first line MUST have 5 syllables, The second line MUST have 7, And the final line has 5. So... let's see those 'creative juices!'

NeedyLittleLaura -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:07:54 PM)
[:@] Oookay I'll get us started!!! CROP Softly your hand stokes, My tender, swollen, buttocks, The welts there mean love.

hisannabelle -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:09:59 PM)
outdoor bondage his breath on my neck the bark bruising to bare breast sweet exhalation. sorry, that's all i have in me for tonight...just finished composing too many poems for my creative writing class tomorrow. being prolific is for the birds. :P

justplainjava -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:20:26 PM)
he secures my arms to branches above, making it so i can only touch the tip of my toes, i feel the sharp edge of a steel blade as he runs down my spine, wiggling at the feel of the cold metal touch my skin

domiguy -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:21:17 PM)
Naked on web cam NeedyLittleLaura sits One more hard line lost.

seanspet -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:24:00 PM)
OMG... you cross the line! LOL.... Domiguy is sad, Oh so lonely for a touch, Submissives beware!

NeedyLittleLaura -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:27:58 PM)
lol seanspet thanks. [:'(] to domiguy

justplainjava -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:27:59 PM)
Greetings Sir Seanspet how should a simple slave beware and what should she beware of, she hears no barking dogs, sees no prowling, cats that could be one's familiar take care and be safe java

MaamJay -> RE: Haikus (3/28/2007 11:48:42 PM)
How hard He hits me Each spank makes my ass so red And my heart softer. What would my life be Without love He expresses Hard slap and soft kiss. If i did not serve How could I ask another To serve Me as well? Finding this lifestyle Has been the best thing for M/me Happy Gemini! That will do for now I think LOL! Maam Jay aka violet[A]

Caitriona -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 12:17:54 AM)
Here are my two contributions for the moment... touch of the leather warming and stinging bare flesh beg for another sitting at his feet his look brings me so much joy love him through service .... and one from Master... another stinging assault on my beaten flesh I love him for it

Hime -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 1:11:41 AM)
so plump is the fruit bruised by the hand that picked it love is its nectar ~ xoxo

justplainjava -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 1:21:11 AM)
the nectar that turns to wine so warming, and soothing as it seeps into soul of a body longing and hungry to the touch be gentle or be it rough but all in all be but pleasing

Hime -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 1:39:14 AM)
Drawn to Me by Lust Captured by My Dominance Bound to Me by Love ~ xoxo

Suleiman -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 1:42:42 AM)
Needy little sub demanding all my juices no time for that now.

Domin8tingUrDrmz -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 2:42:59 AM)
Little boys begging For me to fuck their asses How adorable.

justplainjava -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 2:50:06 AM)
not begging but bending to Master will to follow his wishes, his delight, and to listen to wanting of the darker side of his heart take care and be safe java

kate -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 3:12:35 AM)
not knowing my needs i search in the arms of men always left empty

kate -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 3:15:22 AM)
java...those are beautiful... but they are not hiaku

mons -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 3:36:15 AM)
greetings he crawel to my begging for the crop he wells are red as i touch his skin he moan into my flesh and suck in he is mine he begs for more with eye so loving mons

ExSteelAgain -> RE: Haikus (3/29/2007 7:27:10 AM)
I count syllables And some of you are cheating Lashes are coming

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