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poetry - 12/24/2008 5:18:03 PM   
Feliciasub


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Status: offline 		Context: i was in a bar with a kinky friend of mine. we were there relaxing and having few drinks, a bit flirting. We were discussing what we shall do after we finish up our beers. have a coffee? have something to eat? perhaps something more kinky?

Suddenly He approached my ear and lightly whispered : Oh !you have no idea how i wish i can make you melt with my belt. Then He looked at me with those devilicious eyes bitting His own lower lip.

INSTANT REACTION: i did melt down my pants

So did this ever happened to you before? Does kinky poetry turns you on/off ? What is the best poetry someone told you / What is the best poetry you ever told ?
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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 5:44:32 PM   
shivermetimbers


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ORIGINAL: Feliciasub

What is the best poetry you ever told ?

It isn't kinky, and it isn't even mine, it was on a profile on AOL back around 1998. It actually worked to get me a date though, for climbing in through a window into a bar bathroom when the bartender accidentally locked herself out, and had blown me a kiss for helping her.

"Kisses blown are kisses wasted,
Kisses aren't kisses unless they are tasted.
But kisses spread germs, and germs are hated.
So kiss me baby, I'm vaccinated!"


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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:02:30 PM   
Feliciasub


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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:38:12 PM   
ResidentSadist


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Status: offline 		I am…  
   
I'm a long awaited arrival  
I'm a doctor in despair  
I'm a dream come true  
I'm an apple for your blues  
 
I'm a slow ride on a long train  
I'm a lighting strike  
I'm a long needed caress  
I'm the sadist to give your pleasure a painful redress  
 
I'm a Master of all I see  
I'm a white knight in shiny armor  
I'm an old fashion dungeon keeper  
I'm a savior to set your soul free  
 
I'm a banquette for the hungry
I'm a long cool drink for the thirsty  
I'm a comfort for your needs  
I'm a Band-Aid when you bleed  
 
I am dog in heat  
I am a genius when I think  
I live on the edge of the brink  
But don't fall 'cause that rush hurts more than you think  
 
I play with knives  
I cut my name in flesh  
I tug on your leash  
I play hard like a cat who can spare 9 lives  
 
I open up the forbidden doors  
I let out all the hidden fears  
I bind with real locks and chains  
I will put an end to the years of your emotional pain  
 
I am the man your mother warned you about  
I am the one to break your childhood promises
I have the power to overcome your resistance  
I am the one to cure your ill remnants  
 
If you come along with me  
I will take you to a place you should see  
In this place the animals are free  
… 'cause the animals are me  
 
                          Kalon Eric - March 2001

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:43:09 PM   
persephonee


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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:49:40 PM   
NefertariReborn


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ORIGINAL: persephonee

there once was a girl from nantucket.....


Who said that she wanted to phucket (It's a sport I swear)

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:50:58 PM   
CountrySong


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Status: offline 		I have the start of some of my poetry on my profile.

One thing I love to do with my last partner was have her use a vibrator and create a erotic poem on the spot in story format until she has a climax. She has to keep going until I stop  (I just wish I could do it while I was mounting her but I got too distracted and could not keep rhyming.)

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:55:19 PM   
persephonee


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ORIGINAL: NefertariReborn

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ORIGINAL: persephonee

there once was a girl from nantucket.....


Who said that she wanted to phucket (It's a sport I swear)


i swear it was " who let herself out in a bucket..." but i have no idea what that even means.

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 6:56:30 PM   
HypnoticShadow


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Status: offline 		Anywhere there is shadow,
There am I, watching you.
Anywhere there is light,
There am I, enveloping you.
Anywhere there is air,
There am I, sustaining you.

Fear not the shadows,
For I am watching over you.
Fear not the light,
For I am guiding you.
Fear not to breathe, to live,
For I am right beside you.

Give to Me your heart,
For I claim it.
Share with Me your mind,
For I treasure it.
Surrender to Me your will,
For I own it.

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 7:00:33 PM   
Feliciasub


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Status: offline 		ResidentSadist i have one thing to tell You... who ever said that Sadists are non sensitive persons was a liar

HypnoticShadow You are also a very Good Poet

Wow never tought i would meet so much romancing Man in here :)

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 7:02:27 PM   
NefertariReborn


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ORIGINAL: persephonee

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ORIGINAL: NefertariReborn

quote:

ORIGINAL: persephonee

there once was a girl from nantucket.....


Who said that she wanted to phucket (It's a sport I swear)


i swear it was " who let herself out in a bucket..." but i have no idea what that even means.


nope it's definitely "Who said that she wanted to phucket"  I remember it vividly.

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 7:07:27 PM   
elegantalexis


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Status: offline 		The feel of the rope, binding
the satin of a blindfold, sliding
The smell of leather, teasing
the slap of a flogger, caressing.

The sound of my voice, moaning
the edge of the knife, touching
the scent of the blood, coying
The sound of Sir, laughing.

The tightness of my belly, building
the tremours of my soul, shaking
the tautness of my muscles, climbing
the release of the pleasure, rejoicing.

Shahar

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 7:23:14 PM   
persephonee


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ORIGINAL: NefertariReborn

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ORIGINAL: persephonee

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ORIGINAL: NefertariReborn

quote:

ORIGINAL: persephonee

there once was a girl from nantucket.....


Who said that she wanted to phucket (It's a sport I swear)


i swear it was " who let herself out in a bucket..." but i have no idea what that even means.


nope it's definitely "Who said that she wanted to phucket"  I remember it vividly.


yeah, well then what happens.......

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 8:49:08 PM   
bdaile


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Status: offline 		Well, I doubt this would ever get you into someone's pants, but it's a kinky poem a friend and I found online in the seventh grade (so of course we memorized it and told it to everyone!)...

Eat me, beat me, bite me, blow me,
Suck me, fuck me, oh, so slowly,
Take your time, please be nasty,
Eat me, beat me, make me bleed,
Kinky sex is all I need!

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:11:19 PM   
persephonee


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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:21:55 PM   
SteelofUtah


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After 4 C-Mails (Thank You I'm glad you like it now leave me alone.) I have posted this here. It isn't intended to make you puddle but rather stand as My own Reminder of who I was and don't ever want to be again.

~~Of Things I've Done.~~

I look with eyes of honesty
in this world of deciet and lies
for a girl who waits in sinserity
for another pair of honest eyes.
I am not perfect I must confess
my past is filled with tears
as a Master I have made mistakes
and earned scars throughout the years
a slave is a responsibility
in my youth I took too soon
I took their gift and returned not
and lay wake in all but ruin
I learned my trade on broken things
and the beliefs I've torn apart
for the slave she trusted all I was
her reward a broken heart
I am not perfect of this I've said
Today I try my best
I lead my slave the best I can
and lay my past to rest
I don't forget the person I was
all to quick to take
promises made today I keep
and ammends today I make
I've been entrusted a human life
she gave herself to me
a Man who's made a million wrongs
I wonder if she'll see
I never question her dilligence
as once I did my own
she's the sweetest any man could want
and the only love I've ever known

Steel ~~ 2006 ~Copyrighted~

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:28:00 PM   
SteelofUtah


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Status: offline 		As Taken From Google and a few other sources this is the way the Princeton University Explains it. Can be found in various sites and traced back to the orginal papers as well as documented on Wikipedia (For as accurate as that is who knows)

"This exchange of limericks began with the classic Nantucket limerick and went on from there! In June 14, 1924, the Princeton Tiger published the first limerick about Nantucket. The other papers answered suit.

There once was a man from Nantucket,
Who kept all of his cash in a bucket,
But his daughter, named Nan,
Ran away with a man,
And as for the bucket, Nantucket.
... from the Princeton Tiger

But he followed the pair to Pawtucket,
The man and the girl with the bucket;
And he said to the man,
He was welcome to Nan,
But as for the bucket, Pawtucket.
... from the Chicago Tribune

Then the pair followed Pa to Manhasset,
Where he still held the cash as an asset,
But Nant and the man
Stole the money and ran,
And as for the bucket, Manhasset.
... from the New York Exchange

Of this story we hear from Nantucket,
About the mysterious loss of a bucket,
We are sorry for Nan,
As well as the man-
The cash and the bucket, Pawtucket.
... from the Pawtucket Times"



Steel


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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:28:21 PM   
elegantalexis


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Shahar

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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:29:12 PM   
GoodFeathers


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Status: offline 		Poetry has never really made me all melty, but the last time I heard a bad pick up line did.  It was so absolutely geeky, that I couldn't help myself--he got my digits.


"I wish I were an enzyme, so I could unlock your genes." 

Dear gawd...I laughed and melted.



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RE: poetry - 12/24/2008 9:38:29 PM   
bdaile


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jesus...7th grade????....im homeschooling now. wow.


LOL, sorry! We thought it was the coolest thing ever, but we didn't really know what it meant. I can honestly say that as much crap as I talked in middle school I didn't lose my virginity until the end of sophomore year....and that was on my one year anniversary with the guy.  I promise, school isn't as terrible as it sounds, as long as your kids know better than to do what everyone else is doing...

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