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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 6:20:26 PM   
SirJohnMandevill


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ORIGINAL: littleladybotan

So, I've written a CM profile, and I think it's a pretty okay one; had a few friends look over it, and they didn't see anything spectacularly wrong with it. However, they're not on this site, and all of you are. Is there anything I'm missing, or including, or anything else that you can think of?


Well written, concise, spells things out. Sounds like a weiner to me!
 
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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 10:41:06 PM   
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All in all very nicely done. (And I too would love to have that little black & white number) But I also agree with darkChylde I would add a boy pic. It adds the realistic dimension of you away from scene.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/14/2008 4:51:32 AM   
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< Message edited by StormsSlave -- 3/14/2008 4:53:16 AM >


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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/14/2008 8:33:42 AM   
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I think it was well written and humorous. A good combination. Good luck to you.

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