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Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 3:46:00 AM   
littleladybotan


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Status: offline 		So, I've written a CM profile, and I think it's a pretty okay one; had a few friends look over it, and they didn't see anything spectacularly wrong with it. However, they're not on this site, and all of you are. Is there anything I'm missing, or including, or anything else that you can think of?
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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:02:41 AM   
RCdc


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In all honesty, I thought your profile rocked.  It's not do-me, it's concise and not an epic, the photographs are good and there is some humour showing there too.  I would mention whether you are looking for play/serious/short-term/longterm ultimately, or whether you are just going with the flow.
All in all, (coz I'm not dominant) I would go down the pub with you and feel I would have a good old time.
The only other thing I might alter would be the last photo of you outside - I would shift it up a little to be the second or third photo and not leave it as the last because it's a damn good shot and it shows an artistic flair as well.
 
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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:08:18 AM   
littleladybotan


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Status: offline 		*scribbles* going...with...flow. Got it.

Thanks for the nod on the photo; 'm really pleased with how that turned out.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:19:16 AM   
SailingBum


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Status: offline 		Well since you asked.  THAT dress makes your ass look fat.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:22:54 AM   
littleladybotan


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Status: offline 		I think it's probably the ass more than the dress. *shrugs... cheekily.*

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:26:39 AM   
RCdc


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Status: offline 		I don't think it does but Meh - it makes it spankable
 
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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:36:48 AM   
Justme696


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quote:

It's not do-me,

the.dark.. are you saying that is missing?  :P 

but seriously.
The profile..looks sincere and personal.

< Message edited by Justme696 -- 3/13/2008 4:41:03 AM >

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:38:40 AM   
colouredin


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Status: offline 		Yeah gotta agree with .the.dark on this, i giggled at parts of it which is always a good sign, and deff that last photo is really good id bump that up too :D

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 4:42:37 AM   
RCdc


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Status: offline 		I have only one thing to say to that D...


 
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< Message edited by Darcyandthedark -- 3/13/2008 4:54:29 AM >

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 5:44:20 AM   
littleladybotan


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Status: offline 		Hee. Yeah, I always try to put an element of fun into my writing; probably a result of all that 'show, not tell' stuff they stuff you with in writing class.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 7:42:43 AM   
OmegaG


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Status: offline 		I want access to your closet.

All in all, I can't find anything odious, which for me, is saying a lot.  Rock on and good luck.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 7:54:42 AM   
GreedyTop


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Status: offline 		well done :)

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 8:22:22 AM   
postulant


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Status: offline 		Very nice.  You've effectively conveyed your experience level, or lack thereof, and your desires and inclinations in a playful and fun manner.  And that dress is darling!!

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 9:31:37 AM   
Daddyslilpookie


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From: OC, California
Status: offline 		 Good morning your profile looks fabulous, well done. PS: I like love the dress seriously it is soo cute I want one, it would look killer with my Betty Page stilettos. 

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 9:47:15 AM   
SailingBum


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Status: offline 		I guess that's one way to get your profile out there.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 10:11:03 AM   
littleladybotan


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Status: offline 		Hee, thanks!

The barmaid dress I picked up on eBay; it's made by a now-defunct company called XTC Leather. Glad you like it; that was my first fetish purchase ever.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 11:25:27 AM   
Bound2One


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Status: offline 		You might want to add a bit more about yourself as a person - not just your kink.  I'm not sure if you're looking for a LTR or just a once-in-a-while hookup.  The pics are good - especially the last one, cool shot! 

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 11:29:40 AM   
darchChylde


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From: Warm Springs, GA but i live in San Francisco.
Status: offline 		Maybe it's just me, but i think i'd recommend adding at least one picture of you in boyface.  Maybe something candid, or at least casual and natural.  Beyond that, the profile looks great to me.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 11:33:41 AM   
faerytattoodgirl


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Status: offline 		you need to grow some boobs to go with that dress.

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RE: Looking for a bit of a profile critique - 3/13/2008 1:04:55 PM   
katie978


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Status: offline 		  It looked good to me. Your spelling was nice, you listed a lot about yourself without seeming either obscene or bitter. Can't really speak for dommes, but it looks like a solid profile from this point of view.

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