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dom_dotcom -> Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:01:57 PM)

I walked into that garage sale that crisp November day.
Mainly to calm down from a spat with my submissive,
In which both of us had said more than we should say.

 

I saw the bag tossed forgotten in a corner,
It's leathers were old and frayed.
I almost overlooked it,
Till I saw upon it the D/s Emblem so proudly displayed.

The bag was locked with a padlock,
The contents of it I could but guess.
I asked the woman how much she wanted for it,
My true interest I dared not confess.

"That bag belonged to my brother," she said.
As she softly wiped away a tear.
"We lost him in an auto accident.
It's been just over a year."

 
"His instructions were not to sell the bag to just anyone.
But only to the one who could give the proper answer unto me."
Confused, I asked her what the question was.
She said, "S...S...," and I answered, "c."

 
She smiled, nodded and I wrote a check.
And so the bag became mine.
I had no idea what the contents might be.
But the Emblem alone, I thought to be a good sign.

At home a moment with my power tools,
And the lock lay broken upon the floor.
I poured the contents out at my feet,
And felt my spirits and soul began to soar.

 
Canes, floggers, whips and chains.
Toys of every shape and size,
Dozens of tools of the Master's craft.
Lay in heaps before my eyes.

I gave the bag a final shake,
Before I went to work with leather soap.
When a final item fell from the bag,
A carefully sealed envelope.

 
I opened the envelope and read the words.
Written in a strong but shaking hand.
I knelt there, with the toys spread at my feet,
As tears in a river from my eyes ran.

"My fellow Dominant," said the note.
"If these words you now do see.
Then I know the worst has happened,
And I have not survived my surgery."

 
"My sub and I were coming home,
From a party one early spring day.
I don't remember what we quarreled over,
But I do recall all the words I am ashamed that I did say."

"It was only a moment, I let my attention wonder,
I was such a fool that I did not even see.
I heard steel break and my baby scream but once.
I never did see the tree."

"I awoke at the local hospital,
The nurse looking down at me with sad eyes.
And it was then that I began to realize."

 
"She shed a tear and held my hand.
Then my heart turned to ice as I felt the words she said.
Sir, forgive me for having to tell you this,
But the living go before the dead."

 
"Well, in a moment they will come for me,
But first this note, to a brother Dom I must give.
To place there in my toy bag for me,
I hope to retrieve it, should I live."

 
"And if I should not survive the night,
If I am to join my pet, where I know she waits for me.
Then this bag please take to my sister.
There to sell to the one, who knows the Letters 3."

 
But this last word I send you brother,
Though it is spoken from beyond the grave.
Love your pet, and cherish her,
Be she bottom, submissive or slave."

 
"For the submissive love is like no other,
A thing that cannot be bartered, brought or sold.
And the light in her eyes as she kneels at your feet,
Is worth more than the purest gold."

 
"So remember, yesterday is but a faded memory,
And tomorrow, a dream that is not yet known.
The future is never promised to us,
And this moment is all you truly have, to show her
she is loved and owned."

 
"Well, the nurse is back and I must close.
Let the chips fall where they may.
If your reading this, these toys are now yours.
But always remember my brother Dom, what this day to
you I did say."

I just held the note, then bowed my head.
Without shame the tears did fall,
At the wisdom of a true Master's words.
Then I heard my own submissive call.

 
"My Master," she whispered as she drew me close,
And with love held me to her breast.
"What is it that troubles you my Lord?" she asked.
"I know earlier I was an awful pest."

 
Without a word I drew her close,
And tightly held my love next to me.
I closed my eyes and thought of a Master now gone,
Whose face I would never see....

 
Author Unknown
 
~DDC





daddyncherry -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:17:05 PM)

Wow how beautiful and sad is this???? It reminds me of the country song "Riding with Private Mallone"

Thanks for posting.[:)]




proudsub -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:18:58 PM)

I've seen that before but it always brings tears to my eyes.[:(]




oreogirl -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:27:19 PM)

I started to cry. I've never seen this before.  Thank you for posting.




piercedntattooed -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:35:09 PM)

i have seen this before..still wonderful to post, beautiful




Gwynvyd -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 7:38:16 PM)

Thank you for posting this.. very nice.

Gwyn




TemptingNviceSub -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 8:27:39 PM)

Never saw this.....beautiful....Tempting




PanthersMom -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 9:39:17 PM)

that was really very nice, i'd never heard it before.  thanks for sharing!

PM




Phin -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 10:02:43 PM)

very nice, a beautiful story




astarri -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 10:07:02 PM)

That was really nice ...gave me shivers 




MaamJay -> RE: Purest Gold (1/16/2008 10:55:26 PM)

I've seen it a few times before but it still brings tears to My eyes too ... a wonderful reminder to not let a silly quarrel get in the way of love. Thanks for posting it again :-)

Maam Jay aka violet[A] (who remembers she was a bit of a pest earlier today herself and decides to go give Master an extra hug)




Justme696 -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 1:15:50 AM)

Good morning,

is this a song? Or a poem..or just a writing?

It doesn't do me much (this particular one), but I would love to see you post more if you have :D
Cheers up the forum




Aileen1968 -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 6:25:01 AM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: dom_dotcom

I walked into that garage sale that crisp November day.
Mainly to calm down from a spat with my submissive,
In which both of us had said more than we should say.

 

I saw the bag tossed forgotten in a corner,
It's leathers were old and frayed.
I almost overlooked it,
Till I saw upon it the D/s Emblem so proudly displayed.

The bag was locked with a padlock,
The contents of it I could but guess.
I asked the woman how much she wanted for it,
My true interest I dared not confess.

"That bag belonged to my brother," she said.
As she softly wiped away a tear.
"We lost him in an auto accident.
It's been just over a year."

 
"His instructions were not to sell the bag to just anyone.
But only to the one who could give the proper answer unto me."
Confused, I asked her what the question was.
She said, "S...S...," and I answered, "c."

 
She smiled, nodded and I wrote a check.
And so the bag became mine.
I had no idea what the contents might be.
But the Emblem alone, I thought to be a good sign.

At home a moment with my power tools,
And the lock lay broken upon the floor.
I poured the contents out at my feet,
And felt my spirits and soul began to soar.

 
Canes, floggers, whips and chains.
Toys of every shape and size,
Dozens of tools of the Master's craft.
Lay in heaps before my eyes.

I gave the bag a final shake,
Before I went to work with leather soap.
When a final item fell from the bag,
A carefully sealed envelope.

 
I opened the envelope and read the words.
Written in a strong but shaking hand.
I knelt there, with the toys spread at my feet,
As tears in a river from my eyes ran.

"My fellow Dominant," said the note.
"If these words you now do see.
Then I know the worst has happened,
And I have not survived my surgery."

 
"My sub and I were coming home,
From a party one early spring day.
I don't remember what we quarreled over,
But I do recall all the words I am ashamed that I did say."

"It was only a moment, I let my attention wonder,
I was such a fool that I did not even see.
I heard steel break and my baby scream but once.
I never did see the tree."

"I awoke at the local hospital,
The nurse looking down at me with sad eyes.
And it was then that I began to realize."

 
"She shed a tear and held my hand.
Then my heart turned to ice as I felt the words she said.
Sir, forgive me for having to tell you this,
But the living go before the dead."

 
"Well, in a moment they will come for me,
But first this note, to a brother Dom I must give.
To place there in my toy bag for me,
I hope to retrieve it, should I live."

 
"And if I should not survive the night,
If I am to join my pet, where I know she waits for me.
Then this bag please take to my sister.
There to sell to the one, who knows the Letters 3."

 
But this last word I send you brother,
Though it is spoken from beyond the grave.
Love your pet, and cherish her,
Be she bottom, submissive or slave."

 
"For the submissive love is like no other,
A thing that cannot be bartered, brought or sold.
And the light in her eyes as she kneels at your feet,
Is worth more than the purest gold."

 
"So remember, yesterday is but a faded memory,
And tomorrow, a dream that is not yet known.
The future is never promised to us,
And this moment is all you truly have, to show her
she is loved and owned."

 
"Well, the nurse is back and I must close.
Let the chips fall where they may.
If your reading this, these toys are now yours.
But always remember my brother Dom, what this day to
you I did say."

I just held the note, then bowed my head.
Without shame the tears did fall,
At the wisdom of a true Master's words.
Then I heard my own submissive call.

 
"My Master," she whispered as she drew me close,
And with love held me to her breast.
"What is it that troubles you my Lord?" she asked.
"I know earlier I was an awful pest."

 
Without a word I drew her close,
And tightly held my love next to me.
I closed my eyes and thought of a Master now gone,
Whose face I would never see....

 
Author Unknown
 
~DDC




Oh my.  Where's a vomit spewing smiley emoticon when you need one?
Things like this do absolutely nothing for me.  Is this Castle Realm?
Blah blah blah.




LaTigresse -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 7:27:27 AM)

Oh Aileen, would you be offended if I told you "I love you!!!"? [:D]




IrishMist -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 8:24:33 AM)

Aileen....thank you....I could not find the words to express my disgust




RCdc -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 8:33:23 AM)

Now me, I adore poetry - GOOD poetry - good writing even.
Darcys' writing bloody ROCKS.  This, is well, mediocre at best.  The sentimant behind its is cool, and I am sure it is wonderful to woo someone, however...
 
Plagarism is one of the worst forms of 'admiration'.   [:@]
 
Really - it's not that difficult to quote a source now is it?
It took me LESS THAN 30 SECONDS.

quote:

TheBag
©SirWolfr1
All rights reserved 2002 


I really loathe it - if your going to copy something - .copyitright.
 
the.dark.




IrishMist -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 10:24:41 AM)

quote:

  I really loathe it - if your going to copy something - .copyitright

[sm=applause.gif]




vampiresscammy -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 10:40:34 AM)

the OP did put an anonymous at the bottom, i figured that meant they didn't know whom wrote it, foudn it somewhere thought it was cool and wanted to share

its kinda cool, a little too schmoopy for me, i think i like the idea more then the words




TMaster2 -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 10:43:47 AM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Darcyandthedark


Plagarism [sic] is one of the worst forms of 'admiration'. 



Plagiarism is claiming someone else's work as your own.  This wasn't that, only that the author was unknown, which you in due course, rectified.




RCdc -> RE: Purest Gold (1/17/2008 10:57:10 AM)

Claiming 'author unknown' at the end of a post, then crediting with your own initials at the base, when in fact it is not your signiture line allows for 'misperceptions' to occur.
It took me less than 30 seconds to get the authors name on google of all things.
If the OP was that concerned and that responsible a person, then they would have taken the time to look themselves.
 
As the partner and submissive to a writer and an artist myself - I take this incredibly seriously.  If the OP shows such little compassion for the written word, it speaks volumes for their personality and their lack of followthorugh.  All the poster wanted was to draw positive attention to themselves, not to the words.  However, all they show is that they hold little regard for other peoples works which in turn, shows that I would not trust any control placed in their hands.
 
It was underhanded and showed laziness.
the.dark.




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