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Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 12:30:50 PM

michaelGA2

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here is a poem i just wrote. it took only minutes to complete:

Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive

i glance about with wondering eyes
saddened and shaken
i raise my gaze up to the skies
seeking beyond the clouds what lies

i ponder my worth
to nobody there
from the moment of birth
did anyone really care

my gaze drifts to the sand
the cold sea nipping my feet
the shifting of the land
the depth there to greet

was this the way it was meant to be
lonely and alone in the sunset
welcoming the coldness of the sea
as it rises to envelope me

i think of the silent masses
that never gave a second thought
i watch as the time passes
my last breath in my throat was caught

eyes closing to the darkness below
the wetness of the sea rising
for it is my time to go
with no one realizing

myself i grant one last look
and then the waves cover
the sand below shook
and finally, it was over

comments are welcome

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 1:24:25 PM

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Sounds like you're in the same sort of mood as me, Michael.

Freedom from unhappiness comes only when one realises there is no one to be unhappy, so I'm told. Still, I'd rather be two no ones than one.

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 1:32:04 PM

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Very nice, Michael. Seems we are all under the influence of the full moon or something.

I seem to be suffering an aftershock after this weekend myself :/

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 1:54:16 PM

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Michael that is beautiful!

I am glad I am not the only one in a funk today.

Is mercury retrograding or something?

All I know is that I think I might have lost my "gives a shit" and that just might be dangerous.....for someone.

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 2:20:30 PM

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thank You all for Your replies. yes, i guess i'm in a downward spiral today. it's just good that i still am able to kick out poems from time to time.

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 2:42:18 PM

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Good poem Michael....I'm in a funk myself....pretty sad.

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 2:50:22 PM

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Oh by God, this is so bad
It seems the moon has made us sad
Still there's reason not to rue
For soon fair luna will be new
And then we'll have a different mood
Surely, by her phase imbued
Or could it be that life just sucks
When one has no one there to ............love?

Another 3 minute tour de force LOL!

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RE: Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissive - 10/9/2006 2:50:26 PM

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here's another one i just wrote:

When The Music Ends

i start the dance
with grace and style
a turn and prance
and all the while
i catch Your glance

i shimmy and shake
stand on my toes
as the music wakes
pleasureable throes
the music makes

turning a piroette
leap in the air
this is the best yet
for as i dare
i continue my set

i whip around
and do a spin
i fall to the ground
and begin again
dancing to the sound

then with a final bend
i cartwheel over
a smile i do send
to the potential lover
when the music ends

(i know, sounds kinda corny, but, i like it)

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