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Termyn8or -> RE: Looking for a reviewer (3/26/2011 6:47:42 AM)
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They would only give me nine pages, so I can't really comment on the plot. Nice buildup, very expressive and detailed. It seems to jump around a bit but as in many works, it likely falls together later. I would say - so far so good. One day I wouldn't mind reading the whole thing, but I just had eye surgery and have alot of catching up to do. There is also the fact that I am old school, I like dead trees. Actually I like live ones better but to me, laying down in bed and reading, barely getting the bookmark in place before actually nodding off is more my style. A few times I have actually printed books, which is why I bought a laser printer. Reading the screen on a PC or anything really just doesn't quite do it for me. I do make an exception for fora such as these though, because the interactivity outweighs what I see as a disadvantage. And in a way it was nice, because deep in the bowels of my mind is the making of a yet untold story. Perhaps I will be impelled to write this year. T^T
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