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DarkSteven -> RE: Greatest (1/24/2010 6:12:12 PM)
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1. Try to write in complete sentences. 2. Try to develop a theme and stick to it. 3. Try to be consistent. For example, when you say that you consider G_d to be a matter of nomenclature, then don;t attribute decisions to him. 4. When you make sharply provocative points, explain them. You state that G_d failed from the beginning of time through the entire Bible - any Christian, Jew, or Muslim would disagree with you. 5. Yes, I have heard that Obama is not a US citizen. Yes, I think that's bullshit, as do most of the American people. Considering that, you really should not present that as fact. Why do you use "poet" as your username? I think of poets as vain, fragile types who communicate well. Your post is muscular, ill-informed, and almost incoherent.
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