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Can someone please help me or advise myself on how to m... - 6/14/2009 6:36:49 PM   
ButtlerPaulie70


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Status: offline 		Hello A/all I was just wondering what I can do to make my profile better and also was wanting to know how I should be selling myself to catch the eye of a Mistress. What is it that a Mistress/Goddess looks for in a profile of a slave when she is viewing it, what makes a good profile. I think I need some help so is anyone able to offer me some advice please.

Cheers paulie c
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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/14/2009 6:47:03 PM   
chiaThePet


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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:36:21 AM   
SthrnCom4t


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Status: offline 		GHAA...this is Otter.  Got my Lady's acct up here.  Wait a tic...reposting as me! 

< Message edited by SthrnCom4t -- 6/15/2009 6:37:20 AM >

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:43:51 AM   
OttersSwim


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Status: offline 		GRRR...you can be logged in as you in the CM site, and when you come to the forums, you can be logged in as whoever was on last...

Anywho...

I had posted that I have been to your fine island of Tasmania.  Love the Saturday market in Hobart, and your Tamar Valley has excellent wines!   

So the fact is, you are on an island - even if it is a bloody big island, you have a limited population pool to select from.  Be sure to ferret out any kinky people there and go to munches, etc.  There has to be something going on in either Launceston or Hobart.

I would go through and fill out the profile completely where you select your vanilla interests and such.  Also, go through your profile with a spell checker, and look for a few wrong words you have in there.  I would also put parens ( ) around the uses of "lol".

As Chia has (I think) indicated, putting up another picture or two would help as well. 

Hope that helps! 

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 7:02:49 AM   
SomethingCatchy


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Status: offline 		I think your video is adorable. You're cute, and your nervousness is cute, but you do sound friendly and out going.

And, as an American, gotta love the accent

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 11:46:20 AM   
onlyfreelycaged


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points for sounding honest in the profile.
points for not abusing smiles and other symbols.

now for the not so fun part:

try organizing it into paragraphs....

I'll just go the easy route. I reorganized the information that you gave, and changed the wording a little bit:

Hello my name is Paul, I am a service slave.
My housekeeping skills are remarkable. I cook well and reliably. I can be a shopping buddy, who can also carry the bags. I enjoy being a Jester of sorts for both you and your friends pleasure. I am looking for a woman who’s life I can make easer by providing housekeeping and cooking. I believe this is what I want.


 I am slim and well groomed. I wax my whole body, except for my head.  I run everyday and do light weights. When I get the chance, I play English soccer. I also keep up on the world events by reading a morning paper.
My favorite tv shoes are: Will and Grace,Grey's Anatomy and Gossip Girl.
My favorite movie ever is Pretty Women with Julia Roberts. 

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 12:01:18 PM   
LaTigresse


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Status: offline 		Just my own opinion but, I hate sunglasses photos. If I cannot see their eyes, I am not interested.

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 2:52:06 PM   
ButtlerPaulie70


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Status: offline 		thankyou everyone for your reply's

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 4:49:57 PM   
OfficeChair


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Status: offline 		I think your profile is great and yes I also think you look very cute in your video. I am sure you will find somebody as you would be a very good catch for somebody

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:31:52 PM   
LovingMistress45


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Status: offline 		I like your profile, there are a few typos, but otherwise it describes what you are looking for and what you have to offer very well.  Too bad you are on the other side of the world.

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:39:45 PM   
masmiss


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quote:

ORIGINAL: LaTigresse

Just my own opinion but, I hate sunglasses photos. If I cannot see their eyes, I am not interested.


Ditto.


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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:43:56 PM   
ButtlerPaulie70


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Status: offline 		I can see your point about the sunglasses but I do have two video's whick clearly show my face, thankyou very much for all the comments from E/everybody you are all great.

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 6:48:22 PM   
playfulotter


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Status: offline 		This reminds me of Match.com...they will actually take money from men/women to write profiles for them...now how did or does that affect us looking for a love interest...weird!

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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 10:43:29 PM   
LadyPact


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Status: offline 		I'm terrible for profile review.  My own profile probably shows My lack of ability in the area.

The profile itself isn't bad.  I would go back and correct the spelling mistakes.  There seems to be a decent amount of information about your vanilla interests, which is always a plus.  One place where a lot of subs miss the mark is how they would be willing to serve and/or make the Dominant's life easier, which I think you covered.   I'm sure the video/audio is a bonus, too.  Unfortunately, I'm using the computer that's on it's last leg, so I can see or hear them. 





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RE: Can someone please help me or advise myself on how ... - 6/15/2009 11:09:24 PM   
darkmistressone


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Status: offline 		I think your profile is very good, its easy to read and its says a little about you in both worlds and I really love the two video's as well it shows who you are of which is a little shy but very sexy and very nice a job well done but like LadyPact I am not the best to comment on profiles but yes I like yours very much its well done.

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