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MIntribus -> honest openions (2/19/2009 6:12:37 PM)
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broken bleeding, time stops. seeing into those eyes.
eyes hotter than the sun, colder than ice.
stareing, burning holes in my soul.
fighting not only the urge to give in, but the urge to flee.
slowly the sweat drips from tought muscle.
catching the chill of this frozen expance.
the blink of those eyes, shattering the silence.
my chance, there is the opening.
the only one since this debacle's beginning.
if only i could look away from that stare.
bringing my-self to move.
now.
here is the chance, perfect in its simplicity.
regretting the pain,
fealing the impact of this most agonizing set-back.......
well i would like to here honest thoughts on this pice. and i do appologise for any miss spelling now.
feal free to comment any who read this.
Mintribus
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