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Lumus -> Critique? (4/23/2008 7:44:19 PM)
I wrote a story tonight about a Domme and her submissive boy, entitled, 'Live', in P&RS. It's not a short story [:o] Roughly 5000 words or so. I would like to invite Dommes to read the story and offer their viewpoint - the better to see whether I made the story capture an element that a Domme would appreciate. Any thoughts, opinions, criticisms are appreciated. slips out the back door

LadyRainfire -> RE: Critique? (4/23/2008 7:59:33 PM)
Here is the direct thread if anyone is interested.... http://www.collarchat.com/m_1810147/tm.htm

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