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Hello and a Little Help please ... - 3/31/2008 6:09:52 PM

Fischen

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Greetings folks ...

We are Fischen and flower out of Livingston, Texas ... a small town about 50 miles north of Houston ... Just wanted to stop on by and say Hello to you all, and also to ask those of you who meander on by to critique our profile, and if you see anything that needs improving on, let us know. We promise (pinkie swear even) that we will not hound any folks that don't wish to be hounded (but if you do, let us know ??).

We appreciate your assistance and Thank You for your time.

Fischen and _flower

"If I've made myself too clear, you must have misunderstood me,"
~Alan Greenspan

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RE: Hello and a Little Help please ... - 3/31/2008 6:11:54 PM

masterofdrkness2

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I am not good at the profile thing... but just wanted to stop by and say hello and welcome to CM

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RE: Hello and a Little Help please ... - 3/31/2008 7:09:35 PM

madshysoul

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Hello and Welcome!

If I were looking for what you two are, your profile is one I would probably respond to. It shows a good mix of kink, reality, humor and common sense about the facts of life.

A few minor suggestions/questions:
1. Give a little info (if appropriate) on any details that would rule someone out totally. (IE these three things are fetishes we are entirely not into, so if they're important to you, we're not a good match)
2. The comment on slaves reads a little ambiguous...are you willing to consider slaves or not?
3. I like the journal entry as an example of your Dom preferences, thoug the 2nd to last paragraph comes off the screen as somewhat judgemental and hostile. This is neither good nor bad necessarily, just impartial feedback.
4. Are you looking only for someone in your area, or are you willing to consider helping the right match relocate?

Good luck in your search!

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RE: Hello and a Little Help please ... - 3/31/2008 7:35:35 PM

Fischen

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Thank you to the both of you for responding.

Thank you madshysoul for your feedback. I'll make those changes to the profile you mentioned.

I can understand your feelings towards that 2nd to last paragraph. It was more of an attempt to compare A versus B, but perhaps it can be seen as a criticism, as well as, like you mentioned, judgemental and hostile. I'll need to think that one over a little bit though, I'm not really sure one way or another if I want to keep or remove that statement.

I'm not totally sure if journal entries are correctable, but if they are, and I finally lean towards removing it, I'll figure it out somehow.

Best wishes,

Fischen

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RE: Hello and a Little Help please ... - 3/31/2008 8:10:22 PM

Arrrchibald

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Heyas, welcome. Looks good to me.

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