MistressNoName
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ORIGINAL: Evanesce quote:
Now my personal opinion as someone who has produced commercials, written copy, executive producer for a national infomercial, for many years, its pretty boring. Better copy, better pics, and a few other things might help people buy. If your ad is not written any better I can see why you may be getting no clicks. What's boring? My shop info? It says what it needs to say. Unfortunately, things like sales tax and shipping options just aren't all that exciting. How would you do it differently? And what's wrong with my pics? As far as the ad goes... they're both limited to less than 100 characters. I find it somewhat difficult to describe what I do in 100 characters or less, so the ads look pretty much like every other ad you see on Google or Yahoo searches. That, in itself, is a problem, because it just doesn't stand out. to slavish: Thank you for the suggestions. I'd never heard of either of those books, but will certainly pick up at least one of them. I need all the marketing help I can get! My merchandise is terrific, but if no one is looking, it's not doing me much good. I do have a craft fair lined up for September, and I'm hoping it goes well. Hello Evanesce, I'm gonna add my opinions to the mix...I am not a marketer or sales person or any type of entrepreneur...Just a simple shopper. And from this shopper's pov, the site in and of itself does not excite the eye. I don't know if you have a choice of templates on Etsy, but if you do, you might want to look into what your choices might be. Also, your shop info, right upfront, is a bit off-putting. As a shopper I'm not interested in the S&H or state of Indiana sales tax until such time as I have found something that I think I might like to buy. So if there is any way to put that info, much needed though it is, on another page or further down that first page just so that it isn't the first thing you see, it would just be better on the eye and do more to focus attention to your merchandise. Also, you mentioned that the pull to your items is that they are handmade and one-of-a-kind. This appeals to me. The idea that I might be purchasing something that no one else has...but you need to play that up more. I see a general mention to handmade on your page, but you don't really make a big deal about that. One-of-a-kind can be a huge selling point. Finally, are you intending at all to produce any items that are bdsm specific? If so, I can see a huge market for you at various bdsm events across the country. People LOVE bdsm-related jewelry and such that is handmade and one-of-a-kind. Anyway, hope that helps. MNN Edited for spelling and to add: If you can't do anything about Etsy's template, then you might want to consider having your own site...if cost is an issue right now, may I recommend, freewebs.com? I have a personal site there and several other ppl in the kink community have them for various purposes. You can set up a site there to advertise and sell your goods and eventually as your business grows and you find you need more bandwith, you can upgrade to a paid site. What I like about this service, is that they have an impressive variety of templates and the site management and editing tools are so easy to use, someone with absolutely no CSS or any type of webmaster experience can get up and running within a day or two. Best!
< Message edited by MistressNoName -- 7/3/2007 12:35:50 PM >
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